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May 21, 2013
Wild Flower Too Wild by *Stormchained
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Suggested by Botaros
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Wild Flower Too Wild

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i have free time for commissions x]

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Sitting In A Tree by Audranasa
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Interesting idea, and great composition!

The only really big problem IMHO is the posture of the figure; symmetry of the legs, and that direct angle, doesn't do the figure justice and makes the posture feel artificial. The arms are a little better, but the upper arm symmetry still makes it pretty rigid. Use of a pose reference here would do wonders for it. It's the tiny differences and flow that make all of the difference- like a bit of a twist to the torso, a shift in the shoulders, etc.

There's also a bit of a clash between the style with which the foliage is rendered, which is more abstract, and the figure- though that's a more minor issue. The only way to fix that would be to put a lot more time into the foliage (which might not be worth the effect), or simplify and abstract the figure a bit more (that would be my choice, personally).

Anyway, it's a great piece! Very intriguing.

I hope that was helpful.